Blog Three

My thoughts in how I did on the essay are a bit shaky. I am never completely sure of my writing specie, I always say to myself that there could have been more that I could have added. I struggled a lot with the conclusion in the whole ending it I felt it wasn’t a strong ending. With something that I felt successful it would be putting together my evidence. Well for my topic I choose female empowerment. With the advertisements #LikeAGirl and Dream crazier from the company Nike. It was an eye opening work assignment to work with . Since I have heard ” like a girl” multiple times. But not really but any thought in it until I worked with the advertisement. Something else that I would change is how I started my theist statement. But I feel confident in the way I wrote it .